It is done

Oct. 26th, 2010 05:58 pm
machshefa: (Zen stones)
[personal profile] machshefa
The final chapter of King of Swords, "That which is love, and that which is light..." has posted to:

The Petulant Poetess,

Ashwinder,

OWL,

and fanfiction. net 




*hugs to [livejournal.com profile] ariadne1  for the banner... it has an exceptional provenance.  Thank you, my friend.

As a bonus, some of the cards (Druid Craft Tarot Deck) that appear in the narrative...  

   
Position 10-Outcome      Position 1-Heart of         Position 2-Significator   Position 6-Future             Position 4-Past
                                         the matter


from the second spread (six pointed star)  Pivot of Change...  
The Fool.

Here is the Celtic Cross thrown by the fortune teller... I couldn't get higher resolution, but it gives you some idea of how it appears. :)



Acknowledgements: And so we come to the end of our tale. Finishing this story feels like a milestone in a way that completing no other story has done. I’m a different writer than I was when this story was first begun, and I can’t click “complete” without indulging in some (possibly long-winded) acknowledgements.

Thanks to all of you, enthusiastic and faithful readers, who stayed with the story through long gaps in posting, and welcome to new readers who waited patiently for it to be complete. I have enjoyed each comment and review, and very much enjoy dialoguing about the story. I look forward to questions, reflections, and comments now that the story is complete as well.

Some writers write in isolation, keeping their story and their storytelling under wraps until they feel it’s ready to see the light of day. I, however, am not one of those writers.

I would never have put metaphorical pen to paper to write fiction had it not been for both the urging and support of Annie Talbot. Annie reads more drafts of each chapter (for this and every other story I’ve written) than any human being should ever have inflicted on them with neither a word of complaint or fatigue. Moreover, she made every single chapter better with her touch.

“King of Swords” would never have been born at all had Ariadne not poked me one night and dragged me over to the Potter Place prompt list on The Petulant Poetess. “It’ll be fun!” she said. And it has been. I was still a really brand-new writer, wibbling over every word and shaking with each revealed image. I still do that, but not nearly as much (or for as long) as I did. Thanks to Ariadne and Annie for tolerating me, especially in those early months of writing.

Thanks also to Juno Magic, Mia Madwyn, Subversa, and Drinking Cocoa who have each weighed in on story structure, style and content at various parts of its development. I am fortunate beyond measure to have such generous and talented alpha readers. To Lady Karelia and Kittylefish who were both so enthusiastic about this story from the time it was a tiny thing with only a handful of chapters posted. Kitty has been an unflagging admin for each chapter, patient with her corrections, and enthusiastic with her response to the story. Karelia has been spectacular in both adminning and (speed of light) beta reading, supporting and encouraging me all along the way. This story owes so much to all of you.

*hugs you all

Date: 2010-10-26 11:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] droxy.livejournal.com
congrats! Pretty art on the cards but I do not know what they mean.

Date: 2010-10-26 11:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] machshefa.livejournal.com
Thanks! Aren't those cards yummy?

The fortune teller interprets the spread in Chapter 20 of the story. She describes many of the cards and names a few. I was thinking about perhaps posting a full interpretation of the spread, but someone stashed my notebook somewhere and I can't find it. *sigh

It'll turn up.

*hugs

Date: 2010-10-27 12:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drinkingcocoa.livejournal.com
*preen* *preen* *preen* It is really thrilling to be mentioned by Machshefa in the same sentence as Juno Magic, Mia, and Subversa -- some of my all-time favorite heavy hitters in the writing department! *swoon*

Date: 2010-10-27 12:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] machshefa.livejournal.com
*smooches you

You are right in there with them, my dear!

I thank you.

*hugs

Date: 2010-10-27 12:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kittylefish.livejournal.com
*dances* *hugs* *high fives* you know how much i love your story, and i'm so happy to have watched it grow from the beginning. it's been a privilege to be able to make any little contribution i could to make it more shiny, and i'm honored to be mentioned in your thanks. *more hugs*

p.s. those tarot cards are so very pretty. :D
Edited Date: 2010-10-27 12:24 am (UTC)

Date: 2010-10-27 01:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] machshefa.livejournal.com
*hugs

You added so much!

I adore the cards... And take a look at the King of Swords. RAWR. :)

Date: 2010-10-27 12:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elise-wanderer.livejournal.com

CONGRATULATIONS!!!! And these images are stunning.

Bask in the glory of your accomplishment awhile, and then start that ofic. You're ready!!!!

Date: 2010-10-27 01:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] machshefa.livejournal.com
*beams

*wibbles

Funny you should say that. On the way to work, a plot bunny bit. It's a bit ghostlike, insubstantial, but I'm going to stare at it until it gets a bit more firm... :)

Date: 2010-10-27 01:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] m-mcgonagall-65.livejournal.com
I know nothing about tarot cards or fortune telling. It will be fun to learn something about that when I finally read your story.

Edit: Oops, I started the comment to say congratulations and then got side-tracked by the tarot cards. But what a wonderful accomplishment to finish the story that has been with you for so many months!
Edited Date: 2010-10-27 01:02 am (UTC)

Date: 2010-10-27 02:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] machshefa.livejournal.com
Enjoy! The cards were fun--can't wait to hear what you think!

It feels good to be done and I'm pleased with how it wrapped up. It's been 2 1/2 years since the first chapter posted :)

Date: 2010-10-27 01:46 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] madeleone
Oh I am so squeeee'ing here. I started reading this way back when, but then decided to put it off until it was complete. Not because I didn't love it cuz it did, but I just had too many WIPs and I have a hard time remembering what happened last without doing a lot of re-reading. So now I am going to go and read it from beginning to end. Yayyyy! Thanks so much for sharing this wonderful story with us.

Date: 2010-10-27 02:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] machshefa.livejournal.com
Oh, yay! I'm squeeing that you're going to pick it up again from the beginning! Yayayay! I can't wait to hear what you think. Enjoy!

*dances

Date: 2010-10-27 03:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-rhian.livejournal.com
I am so happy for you, and so excited to start King of Swords! I'm terrible at keeping up with WIPs but will delight in your work now that it's finished.

Congratulations on finishing it, dear. If Tree of Life is any indication of your writing - and it is - then your once and future readers are in for a treat.

~big hugs~
~throws confetti~

Date: 2010-10-27 03:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] machshefa.livejournal.com
*hugs

I know what you mean about WIPs. I also stopped reading all but a select few.

I'm so excited that you're planning to read it now that it's all done. *dances

I hope that you enjoy it as much as you enjoyed Tree of Life. There are some similar themes (I began KoS before ToL was even conceived), so I'll be interested to hear what you think.

*hugs

*dances with you

Date: 2010-10-27 04:21 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] septentrion1970.livejournal.com
Congrats for finishing it! I've started to read the last chapters, but I haven't been able to finish one. I'll leave reviews when I'm done!

Date: 2010-10-27 11:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lifeasanamazon.livejournal.com
Just an utterly wonderful end to an utterly wonderful story. Your sheer inventiveness amazes me. Beautifully done.
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