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 And now I can thank [livejournal.com profile] kizzy7  for the fabulous gift she wrote for me, Mirrorball.  It's lyrical and filled with gorgeous turns of phrase as well as spot-on observations of the characters and their emotional dilemmas (my favorite, of course!).  It's emotionally nuanced and layered, and most importantly of all, shows that it's the relationship that heals.  Even if you don't really love Snuna, this one is worth a read.  Thank you, [livejournal.com profile] kizzy7 !

I also now get to thank [livejournal.com profile] talesofsnape for the fabulous banner (with matching icons!) she made for the story hours before the deadline.  It's perfect for the story, and is a piece of art in and of itself.  See its loveliness? *pauses to admire... guh...



And of course, now I can reveal my own story, written for [personal profile] miss_morland , As to a Portrait, Gently Drawn.  Title credit goes to [livejournal.com profile] ariadne1  who, when I started channeling Whitman (don't ask... really), produced the most perfect title (and who also said, "STOP right here.  It's done."  Blesses her.  And to [livejournal.com profile] annietalbot who, as always, reads four hundred thousand drafts without a whisper of complaint (at least not where I can hear), and guides, and points to where tweaking is needed.  Also, thank you to [livejournal.com profile] somigliana  who suggested that I play with tense and POV.  It hadn't occurred to me to try this, and the use of the present tense in this story is due to her, and I think it adds a great deal to the emotional tone.  Finally, thank you to [personal profile] iulia_linnea for providing a forum for these stories to be born.

I'd never written outside my OTP until this exchange.  Heck, I barely read outside my OTP!  I'm glad I did, though.  I enjoyed writing this story--it flowed in a way that I've not experienced in my prior fic writing and that alone was enjoyable and worth the experience.  I'd not given Luna much thought and it was interesting to do that, and to think about Snape with her as the foil.  

I'll be archiving to OWL soon, and then to the other archives (TPP, fanfic.net) soon after.

All in all, this was a really nice experience.  There are some outstanding stories in the exchange -- and I'm about a week behind in reading.  If I've not reviewed your story yet (oh, flisters who also participated), it means I've not yet caught up, but I shall!


 

Date: 2009-06-01 05:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kribu.livejournal.com
I really, really loved your story. This was an exchange filled with some absolutely beautiful writing (even if I still can't get away from SSHG as the One True Pairing), and yours was one of my absolute favourites and the ones I remember best.

I almost managed to keep up this time, thanks to the shortness of the stories, only one left to read!

Date: 2009-06-01 12:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] machshefa.livejournal.com
Thank you, kribu! *glomps

I'm really happy that my story stayed with you and that you enjoyed it so much. It was a joy to write, despite its angstyness. :) I'm still a bit behind, probably have four or five stories still to read (counts... ack!). I'd hoped to be done before the reveal, but fell behind :(

And I'm with you with HGSS as my OTP :D

Date: 2009-06-01 05:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] somigliana.livejournal.com
Smiles hugely. Your story is an absolute gem, and you know I love that present tense ;) Grin.

Date: 2009-06-01 12:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] machshefa.livejournal.com
Thank you, my dear. I am loving the present tense, myself. I even tried a first person narrative for one of my [livejournal.com profile] hpcon_envy ficlets. :D I loved your story, too. I loved getting a sneak peek! *hugs

Date: 2009-06-01 04:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] talesofsnape.livejournal.com
Smooches! I really loved your story and, as always with your writing, the emotions seemed to sing from the screen. It was a privilege to get a preview so I could do the banner, complete with whirlythings.

Date: 2009-06-02 12:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] machshefa.livejournal.com
Thank you, my dear! *hugs you hard

It's such a pleasure to have such amazing collaboration :D And you know how much I adore your story -- the long version, especially! I am behind on reviewing (can't remember if I did review yours, I think so), and still have a few fics left to read, believe it or not. Aaaah! :)

Date: 2009-06-02 03:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] talesofsnape.livejournal.com
still have a few fics left to read, believe it or not.
As do I, well, two. I did so well at staying on top of things until the last couple of days of the exchange, and then I had something else on for the last few days (can tell you about it on gmail rather than here) and now I have a page of updates to catch up with on OWL again and I still haven't read the last two fics or written anything for over a week (and that was only a few hundred words).

Yes, you did review Art. It's one fic you don't have to worry about.

Date: 2009-06-02 12:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] iulia_linnea.livejournal.com
I actually just finished rereading your gorgeous fic, which I adore. Each fic makes me happy that I ran the exchange; the contribution to Snuna was excellent. :D

Date: 2009-06-02 12:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] machshefa.livejournal.com
*grins

Thank you! I am so excited that you liked it so much! I was surprised and pleased with how easily the story came to me (unusual for me, actually) and really enjoyed the exchange, overall. Thank you so much for running it!

Date: 2009-06-04 04:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kizzy7.livejournal.com
You are very welcome, and again, thank you for such a wonderful prompt!!! I am SO glad you enjoyed-- having read much by you, I was a *little* nervous. You are such an incredible writer!

And I loved loved your story, it was gorgeous. Absolutely gorgeous. A brilliant exchange!!

Date: 2009-06-04 12:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] machshefa.livejournal.com
I did enjoy it very much! And I'm so flattered... thank you *blushes. I'm delighted that you loved Portrait. It makes me teary when I read it but that's b/c I have those characters in my head, you know?

It was a brilliant exchange! I'm still a few stories behind. Have had no time to read but oddly have written 1400 words for the next chapter of King of Swords. Writing is weird that way. :)

*hugs

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